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  • Other Poetry Re: To forgive, divine

    like seeing for the first time. I think you can make this more direct by using the word blind somewhere in here. [s]but[/s] you can ' t have the brightest ...

    Aug 27, 2006
  • Writing Tips Re: How to Avoid Sex Scenes

    I think that's a great method! I also tend to describe more of the character's feelings, the inner thoughts, in those times - rather than the actual physical actions. Too ...

    Aug 24, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Ashes, Ashes

    This is how you feel the flow of fire, as it pulls you taut and graceful in stadium lights. Blare down at the brass instruments, bellowing the final tidal note ...

    Aug 24, 2006
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Tossing Knives

    Face paint makes our show that of inkblots. Tossing sabers and fire, talent burns the grass bare As we are behind circus curtains clandestine. Overtime, every pore erupts in sweat ...

    Aug 24, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Balkline

    One day I will learn to find Times New Roman as beautiful as the words I set down. I. You bleed fiber under a sweaty sun, perspiration dribbling from heavens ...

    Aug 23, 2006
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Random Linden stuff

    Sam glanced idly at the book she held, her search still fruitless after three hours. She had several books strewn about her, some falling off the small table in the ...

    Aug 22, 2006
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Bubblejuice

    Unspoken words, a thousand to think of, each chinks of ice thinning my blood; Steel souls form diadems, flavored saccharine. But as useless as the space between our heartbeats, I ...

    Aug 22, 2006
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Haiku written in German

    Okay, I guess my comment didnt go through. Ah, my husband, my treasure. I do not find the night dead. Separate romantically. I think the entire fact that it's german ...

    Aug 21, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    Warlord of Mystic. I happen to like my position. It's the only thing I'm good at. --Empri Do you have to ask? --Emperor Yes. It's called being God. It's very ...

    Aug 21, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: not even a farewell

    I back these comments and, in addition: hid ing (den) in (behind) your eyes

    Aug 21, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hitching a Ride

    *bites lip* Organ walls...like the walls of organs... You know, the intestine-y stuff. That was my point.

    Aug 21, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: good night sweet ladies good night

    this skin here is parchment this blood here is ink and what rots is in this and in you This really doesn't have a point to it. Otherwise, this is ...

    Aug 20, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Myspace!

    Mine is

    Aug 19, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Nine O'Clock in Gaithersburg

    and lingua ignota between sap and blood ; I'd see this better with just a plain old period. (a) steadfast reminder of life before light. Since the "night" is a ...

    Aug 19, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shakespeare's Casanova

    but forgive me, [s]now[/s] for i have sinned, [s]darling[/s] The occasionally "love" or "darling" adds to the perspective of the speaker, but extra words are reoccuring in your work. Just ...

    Aug 19, 2006


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